And the finale!
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seiberwingFirst chapter.
Second chapter.
Third chapter.
Fourth chapter.
Fifth chapter.
Sixth chapter.
Lack of Forgiveness
By KellyQ
Chapter Seven
Cyclonus: M’lord, we’re starting to run out of escape possibilities.
Galvatron: We’ll deal with it when we get to the end. For now, continue the mocking!
Scourge: Aye aye, captain! *salutes*
The second commander gulped hard knowing what it was going to be the topic.
Cyclonus: He knew he should have just gotten Where Babies Come From and dispensed with it.
Scourge: Now, when a Decepticon commander and his rival hate each other very much…
Cyclonus...you're doomed, the second commander though, doomed for loving Galvatron. He couldn't help it though-the feeling he had felt right.
Galvatron: Didn’t we just have this line back in chapter six?
"Now," Galvatron started snapping the second commander out of his thoughts,
Galvatron: Get out of my head, Cyclonus!
Cyclonus: I suppose it’s good to know I’m always on your mind.
"Unicron built you to be my number one but you have second thoughts-why?"
Scourge: Galvatron…I’m straight. I’m sorry, I know I’m a huge disappointment to you. It’s not your fault. It’s genetic.
Galvatron: What on Earth are you on about?
Galvatron knew better than to think that Unicron had any love within his spark-considering that he tortured Galvatron to no end.
Scourge: Armada Sideways might dispute that…
Cyclonus licked his lips again pondering on how he was going to tell Galvatron.
Galvatron: He hadn’t meant to shrink the cannon in the wash, but the problem was still there.
Now he wished they where both Auotbots-they seam to have an easier time sharing their feelings than Decepticons.
Cyclonus: We share our feelings. We just use guns instead of poetry.
"Well?"
Cyclonus was about to say something when Scourge's voice rang out. The two turned around to see the other Decepticons running up.
Scourge: Don’t start being snuggly without me!
"Why did you call us back, mighty one," Scourge said, "we found energon and was going to start putting them in cubes for you."
Cyclonus: Wait, when he call them back?
Galvatron: You expect continuity?
"Well don't just stand there. Get as much as you can and take it back to Char but you Rumble. Now, start shaking things up!"
Cyclonus: …why? They’re inside.
Galvatron: Perhaps there was extra fluff hidden under the floor, causing this madness.
"Right!"
Rumble's arms transformed as he hunched over-giving the ground a good pounding.
Scourge: Unfortunately, the ground never got his name and was forced to raise their pebbles by itself.
******
Galvatron: Here.
Cyclonus: Industrial strength duct tape? Brilliant, my lord.
Scourge: No one appreciates my talent.
The other Decepticons turned and walked back leaving the three to do their business.
Scourge: Yes!
Cyclonus: You’re not one of the three, Scourge.
Scourge: It never specified. Leave me my fantasies.
Cyclonus: I’d rather not. Your fantasies disturb me.
"Now that we have that taken care of," Galvatron started seeing that the lights went back on, "we can-"
Galvatron: Turn them off again!
The lights started to flicker again causing Galvatron to flair up.
Scourge: …ow.
Cyclonus: What?
Scourge: *whisper to Cyclonus* I just got an image of Galvatron as a peacock.
Cyclonus: …ow.
Scourge was going to pay for lying to him! Cyclonus frowned at first until he saw Galvatron's expression change to pure anger.
"That god damn traitor!" Galvatron hissed.
Scourge: I did nothing!
"Sir?"
"Scourge said we had enough," Galvatron explained as the flickered again, "he lied to me! Cyclonus, bring him here!"
Cyclonus: Actualy, apparently you did.
********
Cyclonus: There! Gagged and silenced, sir.
Scourge: XO ***/***/********!
Galvatron: Is he…singing in emoticons?
Cyclonus: *facepalm*
Scourge: ^_^
Scourge was the last person he wanted to be alone with-considering what happened last time.
Scourge: There was a reason Galvatron had banned bubble wrap from the base.
He really had no choice but look for the traitor. He looked in Scourge's room. He wasn't there. He looked at his post and wasn't there either.
Galvatron: In fact, his last post was just a pair of memes and links to Youtube videos of dancing cats.
This caused Cyclonus to frown. Where was that traitor?
Cyclonus: “Where’s that Traitor?” This is starting to sound like a children’s book.
Scourge: Complete with pop-up knives.
"Looking for me?"
The second commander turned to see Scourge holding a half cube of energon.
Galvatron: What’s this, the second time in this fic you’ve gotten drunk?
Scourge: Someone really needs to hold an intervention for me.
He had a glint in his optics causing Cyclonus to shiver slightly.
Scourge: With…bah. Not even worth it.
Cyclonus: *pats him on the shoulder*
Scourge dropped the energon cube and walked up to the second commander. Cyclonus backed away but fell back on his butt.
Cyclonus: Such elegant phrasing.
He looked up to see that Scourge was still walking toward him.
Scourge: This week, on Wild Cybertron, we attempt to tame the wild SNAD. Watch out for his wibbling, it’s contagious.
"Scourge, stay...away from me!" Cyclonus ordered.
Galvatron: I have three tons of fluff and I know how to use it!
By know he was against the wall shaking. "You know," Scourge said with a twisted smirk, "I've had my optics on you."
Scourge: So could you please give them back? I can’t see a damned thing.
Scourge was inches away from Cyclonus pressing his body against his. Cyclonus tried to push Scourge away but he got a hold of the second commanders arms and held them over his head.
Scourge: I’m enjoying the whole ‘increased strength’ angle, but I wish it would be used for more than attempting to rape Cyclonus. It’s getting old.
Cyclonus' optics widen as Scourge hand dropped lower. The second commander tried to wiggle free but he couldn't.
Scourge: It should be easy, what with me letting go of his arms just now.
Cyclonus: Perhaps they forgot to mention handcuffs?
"Let me go!"
The twisted smirk never left as Scourge leaned close to Cyclonus' ear. "If you think I'm going too-"
Scourge: Going? I thought I was coming.
Cyclonus: Scourge!
Scourge: What? Coming to Galvatron’s room. What were you thinking?
"What's-Scourge!"
Cyclonus: Scourge: noun. A filthy-minded creature with an inability to keep its mouth shut and a strange resemblance to Ming the Merciless.
It was Galvatron and Sweeps.
Scourge: At least they got the number of them right.
The first thing Scourge did was move out of the way; took hold of Cyclonus and pushed him toward Galvatron. The leader stepped up and caught the second commander just as Scrounge transformed and few off.
Scourge: “Scrounge”? When did he get here?
Galvatron: Whoever he is, he apparently just went through the roof.
"Sweeps, go after him and bring him back-I'll have Soundwave join you momentarily. Now go!"
Galvatron: Because Soundwave is quite capable of detecting and capturing the finest tracker in the army.
Cyclonus: Perhaps he was needed for the interrogation session later?
Scourge: *head in his hands* Make my lot worse, why don’t you?
"Right!"
Sweeps transformed and flew off leaving the two alone.
Scourge: So now there’s a Sweep named Sweep and a Sweep named Sweeps. This is not a creative namer.
Cyclonus: How do you tell them apart?
Scourge: Who needs to? If it’s the fault of one of them, the others were probably involved.
Galvatron looked down at his second commander to see how pail he looked and he was shivering.
Cyclonus: Apparently I was a triplechanger and never knew it.
Galvatron: Yes, but I fail to see how being a pail would be useful in battle.
"I better get you to repair bay!"
"N-no. I just need to sit for a moment." Cyclonus responded in a shaky voice.
Scourge: Perhaps on your bed. You can come too. You know, for moral support.
Galvatron sat him down. Still having his arm around Cyclonus Galvatron sat next to him. "What was Scourge doing?"
Galvatron: Practicing for the play next month. He took the part of Starscream and was attempting to get into character.
Cyclonus: …that makes a disturbing amount of sense, my lord.
Scourge was going to pay for trying to hurt Cyclonus!
Scourge: In unmarked bills!
Cyclonus lowered his head as his face turned dark.
Cyclonus: Apparently Decepticons do get radiation tans.
This was his fault. He knew how to protect himself. So why couldn't he do this time?
Cyclonus: Exactly!
Cyclonus sat up from his bed. He still had his little mission to do and was going to fulfill it.
Scourge: Now, where had he put the fuzzy handcuffs…
"And where are you going?"
Cyclonus: To throw up?
Scourge: To Disney World?
Galvatron: To the Bat Cave?
Cyclonus turned his head to see that it was Galvatron sitting on a chair on the opposite side of the bed.
Galvatron: My newest invention! The Bedchair!
Cyclonus: Who else would it be, you're the only one in the room.
"I was going to bring Scourge back, mighty one."
Galvatron: I thought he might like to watch.
Scourge: *sidelong glance at Galvatron, one eye ridge raised*
"No! Scourge all most raped you and I don't want that to happen to you." Galvatron said getting to his feet and gently laying Cyclonus back down.
Galvatron: And here I thought I did want Cyclonus to get raped by a demonic Scourge. How surprising that I did not.
Scourge: There’s a number of jokes I could make here and yet none of them would be appropriate. And five would get me shot. So I’m just going to sit here and wait for the hurt/comfort smut.
Cyclonus' lower lip started to tremble as he turned his head. "I'm sorry, mighty one."
Galvatron: And then it vibrated clean off. Hook was going to be in trouble.
This caused Galvatron to frown with slight worry in his optics. "Sorry for what?"
Cyclonus: For being a useless out of character twink.
"For everything. Sending you to Torkulon and falling in love with you."
Galvatron: I hardly think they are on par with each other.
By know Cyclonus had tears coming down his face as he turned his whole body sobbing.
Cyclonus: Good grief.
Galvatron never seen Cyclonus like this. The leader reached out really wanting Cyclonus to stop crying or-comfort him.
Scourge: *attempts to break the tension* In bed? *cricket chirps*
Cyclonus: It was a good try, Scourge.
Galvatron: Who let the Insecticons in here?
Showing emotions was not really his specialty but he really didn't want the second commander to stop crying.
Cyclonus: Galvatron’s one of the most emotional beings I know, actually. And didn’t he just say…
Scourge: Typo.
Galvatron: It had better be!
"Cyclonus, will you stop crying! I want to know why you love me."
Galvatron: Blast him already! Knock sense into his foolish head! Do something violent!
The second commander slowly turned to face the leader with tears still coming down his face.
Scourge: Where’s all this coming from, anyway? We don’t have tear ducts.
Cyclonus: Well, the rest of me seems to be broken, why not my optics?
"You...your...your the hottest Decepticon I've ever seen-"
Scourge: O_O
Cyclonus: O_o
Galvatron: …WHAT IN BLAZES IS THIS!? *fires at the screen. The shot rebounds and somehow hits the opposite wall*
Scourge: The entire point of this madness was that Galvatron is sex on legs? That’s it? Not even a little depth? This has to be a joke.
Cyclonus: I’m going to need to go lie down after this.
Galvatron: And I’m going to need to destroy a planet or two. This is intolerable!
Galvatron optics widen in shock. Did the leader hear him right-that he was hot?
Galvatron: I’m steaming, in fact. *a few sparks fly from his temples*
Cyclonus turned his head not wanting to see the disgust on the leaders face.
Galvatron: You can be certain that I’m disgusted! I’m disgusted with this whole mess!
Galvatron smiled slightly as he reached out and cupped Cyclouns face whipping the tears from his face.
Scourge: Hurt/comfort mixed with BDSM. This author has some very strange kinks.
"Your hot too Cyclonus." Galvatron said pressing his lips against the second commander.
Galvatron: Bah! As if I pick my lieutenants based on beauty!
Cyclonus: That simply happens to be a happy side-effect, m’lord.
To Be Continued ....
*The screen creaks, sways, and then falls over backwards. A small plume of smoke begins to waft upwards*
Cyclonus: Hm. Apparently the author never did continue.
Galvatron: And all the better for her that she did not! This insanity can finally end! *sweeps out of the room, his cannon already charging. Cyclonus follows, leaving Scourge alone in the darkened theater*
Scourge: *puts his feet up on the seat next to him, looking disappointed* All that and I get nothing out of it. And here I thought we’d at least have to end with a threesome just to leave again.
Galvatron: *from the door* Everything in its proper order, Scourge! Destruction, then relaxation. *cruel smirk* Now come out of there!
Scourge: …! *scarpers out of the theater, grinning* Be right there, mighty one!
Second chapter.
Third chapter.
Fourth chapter.
Fifth chapter.
Sixth chapter.
Lack of Forgiveness
By KellyQ
Chapter Seven
Cyclonus: M’lord, we’re starting to run out of escape possibilities.
Galvatron: We’ll deal with it when we get to the end. For now, continue the mocking!
Scourge: Aye aye, captain! *salutes*
The second commander gulped hard knowing what it was going to be the topic.
Cyclonus: He knew he should have just gotten Where Babies Come From and dispensed with it.
Scourge: Now, when a Decepticon commander and his rival hate each other very much…
Cyclonus...you're doomed, the second commander though, doomed for loving Galvatron. He couldn't help it though-the feeling he had felt right.
Galvatron: Didn’t we just have this line back in chapter six?
"Now," Galvatron started snapping the second commander out of his thoughts,
Galvatron: Get out of my head, Cyclonus!
Cyclonus: I suppose it’s good to know I’m always on your mind.
"Unicron built you to be my number one but you have second thoughts-why?"
Scourge: Galvatron…I’m straight. I’m sorry, I know I’m a huge disappointment to you. It’s not your fault. It’s genetic.
Galvatron: What on Earth are you on about?
Galvatron knew better than to think that Unicron had any love within his spark-considering that he tortured Galvatron to no end.
Scourge: Armada Sideways might dispute that…
Cyclonus licked his lips again pondering on how he was going to tell Galvatron.
Galvatron: He hadn’t meant to shrink the cannon in the wash, but the problem was still there.
Now he wished they where both Auotbots-they seam to have an easier time sharing their feelings than Decepticons.
Cyclonus: We share our feelings. We just use guns instead of poetry.
"Well?"
Cyclonus was about to say something when Scourge's voice rang out. The two turned around to see the other Decepticons running up.
Scourge: Don’t start being snuggly without me!
"Why did you call us back, mighty one," Scourge said, "we found energon and was going to start putting them in cubes for you."
Cyclonus: Wait, when he call them back?
Galvatron: You expect continuity?
"Well don't just stand there. Get as much as you can and take it back to Char but you Rumble. Now, start shaking things up!"
Cyclonus: …why? They’re inside.
Galvatron: Perhaps there was extra fluff hidden under the floor, causing this madness.
"Right!"
Rumble's arms transformed as he hunched over-giving the ground a good pounding.
Scourge: Unfortunately, the ground never got his name and was forced to raise their pebbles by itself.
******
Galvatron: Here.
Cyclonus: Industrial strength duct tape? Brilliant, my lord.
Scourge: No one appreciates my talent.
The other Decepticons turned and walked back leaving the three to do their business.
Scourge: Yes!
Cyclonus: You’re not one of the three, Scourge.
Scourge: It never specified. Leave me my fantasies.
Cyclonus: I’d rather not. Your fantasies disturb me.
"Now that we have that taken care of," Galvatron started seeing that the lights went back on, "we can-"
Galvatron: Turn them off again!
The lights started to flicker again causing Galvatron to flair up.
Scourge: …ow.
Cyclonus: What?
Scourge: *whisper to Cyclonus* I just got an image of Galvatron as a peacock.
Cyclonus: …ow.
Scourge was going to pay for lying to him! Cyclonus frowned at first until he saw Galvatron's expression change to pure anger.
"That god damn traitor!" Galvatron hissed.
Scourge: I did nothing!
"Sir?"
"Scourge said we had enough," Galvatron explained as the flickered again, "he lied to me! Cyclonus, bring him here!"
Cyclonus: Actualy, apparently you did.
********
Cyclonus: There! Gagged and silenced, sir.
Scourge: XO ***/***/********!
Galvatron: Is he…singing in emoticons?
Cyclonus: *facepalm*
Scourge: ^_^
Scourge was the last person he wanted to be alone with-considering what happened last time.
Scourge: There was a reason Galvatron had banned bubble wrap from the base.
He really had no choice but look for the traitor. He looked in Scourge's room. He wasn't there. He looked at his post and wasn't there either.
Galvatron: In fact, his last post was just a pair of memes and links to Youtube videos of dancing cats.
This caused Cyclonus to frown. Where was that traitor?
Cyclonus: “Where’s that Traitor?” This is starting to sound like a children’s book.
Scourge: Complete with pop-up knives.
"Looking for me?"
The second commander turned to see Scourge holding a half cube of energon.
Galvatron: What’s this, the second time in this fic you’ve gotten drunk?
Scourge: Someone really needs to hold an intervention for me.
He had a glint in his optics causing Cyclonus to shiver slightly.
Scourge: With…bah. Not even worth it.
Cyclonus: *pats him on the shoulder*
Scourge dropped the energon cube and walked up to the second commander. Cyclonus backed away but fell back on his butt.
Cyclonus: Such elegant phrasing.
He looked up to see that Scourge was still walking toward him.
Scourge: This week, on Wild Cybertron, we attempt to tame the wild SNAD. Watch out for his wibbling, it’s contagious.
"Scourge, stay...away from me!" Cyclonus ordered.
Galvatron: I have three tons of fluff and I know how to use it!
By know he was against the wall shaking. "You know," Scourge said with a twisted smirk, "I've had my optics on you."
Scourge: So could you please give them back? I can’t see a damned thing.
Scourge was inches away from Cyclonus pressing his body against his. Cyclonus tried to push Scourge away but he got a hold of the second commanders arms and held them over his head.
Scourge: I’m enjoying the whole ‘increased strength’ angle, but I wish it would be used for more than attempting to rape Cyclonus. It’s getting old.
Cyclonus' optics widen as Scourge hand dropped lower. The second commander tried to wiggle free but he couldn't.
Scourge: It should be easy, what with me letting go of his arms just now.
Cyclonus: Perhaps they forgot to mention handcuffs?
"Let me go!"
The twisted smirk never left as Scourge leaned close to Cyclonus' ear. "If you think I'm going too-"
Scourge: Going? I thought I was coming.
Cyclonus: Scourge!
Scourge: What? Coming to Galvatron’s room. What were you thinking?
"What's-Scourge!"
Cyclonus: Scourge: noun. A filthy-minded creature with an inability to keep its mouth shut and a strange resemblance to Ming the Merciless.
It was Galvatron and Sweeps.
Scourge: At least they got the number of them right.
The first thing Scourge did was move out of the way; took hold of Cyclonus and pushed him toward Galvatron. The leader stepped up and caught the second commander just as Scrounge transformed and few off.
Scourge: “Scrounge”? When did he get here?
Galvatron: Whoever he is, he apparently just went through the roof.
"Sweeps, go after him and bring him back-I'll have Soundwave join you momentarily. Now go!"
Galvatron: Because Soundwave is quite capable of detecting and capturing the finest tracker in the army.
Cyclonus: Perhaps he was needed for the interrogation session later?
Scourge: *head in his hands* Make my lot worse, why don’t you?
"Right!"
Sweeps transformed and flew off leaving the two alone.
Scourge: So now there’s a Sweep named Sweep and a Sweep named Sweeps. This is not a creative namer.
Cyclonus: How do you tell them apart?
Scourge: Who needs to? If it’s the fault of one of them, the others were probably involved.
Galvatron looked down at his second commander to see how pail he looked and he was shivering.
Cyclonus: Apparently I was a triplechanger and never knew it.
Galvatron: Yes, but I fail to see how being a pail would be useful in battle.
"I better get you to repair bay!"
"N-no. I just need to sit for a moment." Cyclonus responded in a shaky voice.
Scourge: Perhaps on your bed. You can come too. You know, for moral support.
Galvatron sat him down. Still having his arm around Cyclonus Galvatron sat next to him. "What was Scourge doing?"
Galvatron: Practicing for the play next month. He took the part of Starscream and was attempting to get into character.
Cyclonus: …that makes a disturbing amount of sense, my lord.
Scourge was going to pay for trying to hurt Cyclonus!
Scourge: In unmarked bills!
Cyclonus lowered his head as his face turned dark.
Cyclonus: Apparently Decepticons do get radiation tans.
This was his fault. He knew how to protect himself. So why couldn't he do this time?
Cyclonus: Exactly!
Cyclonus sat up from his bed. He still had his little mission to do and was going to fulfill it.
Scourge: Now, where had he put the fuzzy handcuffs…
"And where are you going?"
Cyclonus: To throw up?
Scourge: To Disney World?
Galvatron: To the Bat Cave?
Cyclonus turned his head to see that it was Galvatron sitting on a chair on the opposite side of the bed.
Galvatron: My newest invention! The Bedchair!
Cyclonus: Who else would it be, you're the only one in the room.
"I was going to bring Scourge back, mighty one."
Galvatron: I thought he might like to watch.
Scourge: *sidelong glance at Galvatron, one eye ridge raised*
"No! Scourge all most raped you and I don't want that to happen to you." Galvatron said getting to his feet and gently laying Cyclonus back down.
Galvatron: And here I thought I did want Cyclonus to get raped by a demonic Scourge. How surprising that I did not.
Scourge: There’s a number of jokes I could make here and yet none of them would be appropriate. And five would get me shot. So I’m just going to sit here and wait for the hurt/comfort smut.
Cyclonus' lower lip started to tremble as he turned his head. "I'm sorry, mighty one."
Galvatron: And then it vibrated clean off. Hook was going to be in trouble.
This caused Galvatron to frown with slight worry in his optics. "Sorry for what?"
Cyclonus: For being a useless out of character twink.
"For everything. Sending you to Torkulon and falling in love with you."
Galvatron: I hardly think they are on par with each other.
By know Cyclonus had tears coming down his face as he turned his whole body sobbing.
Cyclonus: Good grief.
Galvatron never seen Cyclonus like this. The leader reached out really wanting Cyclonus to stop crying or-comfort him.
Scourge: *attempts to break the tension* In bed? *cricket chirps*
Cyclonus: It was a good try, Scourge.
Galvatron: Who let the Insecticons in here?
Showing emotions was not really his specialty but he really didn't want the second commander to stop crying.
Cyclonus: Galvatron’s one of the most emotional beings I know, actually. And didn’t he just say…
Scourge: Typo.
Galvatron: It had better be!
"Cyclonus, will you stop crying! I want to know why you love me."
Galvatron: Blast him already! Knock sense into his foolish head! Do something violent!
The second commander slowly turned to face the leader with tears still coming down his face.
Scourge: Where’s all this coming from, anyway? We don’t have tear ducts.
Cyclonus: Well, the rest of me seems to be broken, why not my optics?
"You...your...your the hottest Decepticon I've ever seen-"
Scourge: O_O
Cyclonus: O_o
Galvatron: …WHAT IN BLAZES IS THIS!? *fires at the screen. The shot rebounds and somehow hits the opposite wall*
Scourge: The entire point of this madness was that Galvatron is sex on legs? That’s it? Not even a little depth? This has to be a joke.
Cyclonus: I’m going to need to go lie down after this.
Galvatron: And I’m going to need to destroy a planet or two. This is intolerable!
Galvatron optics widen in shock. Did the leader hear him right-that he was hot?
Galvatron: I’m steaming, in fact. *a few sparks fly from his temples*
Cyclonus turned his head not wanting to see the disgust on the leaders face.
Galvatron: You can be certain that I’m disgusted! I’m disgusted with this whole mess!
Galvatron smiled slightly as he reached out and cupped Cyclouns face whipping the tears from his face.
Scourge: Hurt/comfort mixed with BDSM. This author has some very strange kinks.
"Your hot too Cyclonus." Galvatron said pressing his lips against the second commander.
Galvatron: Bah! As if I pick my lieutenants based on beauty!
Cyclonus: That simply happens to be a happy side-effect, m’lord.
To Be Continued ....
*The screen creaks, sways, and then falls over backwards. A small plume of smoke begins to waft upwards*
Cyclonus: Hm. Apparently the author never did continue.
Galvatron: And all the better for her that she did not! This insanity can finally end! *sweeps out of the room, his cannon already charging. Cyclonus follows, leaving Scourge alone in the darkened theater*
Scourge: *puts his feet up on the seat next to him, looking disappointed* All that and I get nothing out of it. And here I thought we’d at least have to end with a threesome just to leave again.
Galvatron: *from the door* Everything in its proper order, Scourge! Destruction, then relaxation. *cruel smirk* Now come out of there!
Scourge: …! *scarpers out of the theater, grinning* Be right there, mighty one!
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Date: 2007-02-18 01:38 am (UTC)Also, Seiber, you rock. :D
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Date: 2007-02-18 01:40 am (UTC)and daringly beautifulto make up for it*Yay!
Might do another, if I can find one bad enough to be interesting.
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Date: 2007-02-18 02:08 am (UTC)Scourge: O_O
Cyclonus: O_o
Exsqueeze me?? By Primus, that's the worst line...EVER in the history of bad lines. A little OOCness...okay, a crapload of OOCness...but- but! That line! Gah!
*goes to scrub brain*
Funny stuff, as always. I don't know how you stood that ficcage lol.
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Date: 2007-02-18 02:15 am (UTC)It reminds me of kids in elementary school who have "boyfriends" and "girlfriends" when they're 8.
At any rate, if you find another fic that suits the MST idear, Please, have do so :) Jokes like these make the day funny :D
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Date: 2007-02-19 03:00 am (UTC)Really, though, great job. XD
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Date: 2007-02-19 12:20 pm (UTC)Fic was painful; the MST was great. *salutes your powers of endurance and snark*
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