Exactly. I don't delete any of my reviews, I've even still got, even this one, which seems to accuse me of plagiarism:
Okay one question. When Megatron asked Starscream that if he told him to fly into the sun he would do it. I mean that just doesn't make any sense! You'd have to be really stupid to do this. And another thing isn't this like a remake of one of the episodes of transformers enegon? If you're going to write a story then make it your own thing! Not something you saw! Please remember this in the future with your writing. P.S. I took your advice on writing not with script format in my later chapters so stop telling me it's bad to do that! When you get to my twelve chapter in Friends Alike and the third in Milo then you can review about that. But besides that review anything you'd like. ^_^
If there was an episode that featured Megatron making out with Starscream, I sure as hell wish I hadn't missed it.
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Date: 2005-10-06 10:30 am (UTC)Okay one question. When Megatron asked Starscream that if he told him to fly into the sun he would do it. I mean that just doesn't make any sense! You'd have to be really stupid to do this. And another thing isn't this like a remake of one of the episodes of transformers enegon? If you're going to write a story then make it your own thing! Not something you saw! Please remember this in the future with your writing. P.S. I took your advice on writing not with script format in my later chapters so stop telling me it's bad to do that! When you get to my twelve chapter in Friends Alike and the third in Milo then you can review about that. But besides that review anything you'd like. ^_^
If there was an episode that featured Megatron making out with Starscream, I sure as hell wish I hadn't missed it.