The penultimate chapter of "Primus' Gift", or rather the penultimate chapter of what we have. Now with bonus random OCs that nobody gives a damn about!

Part One
Part Two
Part Three
Part 4a

( Introduced with no fanfare or title, because it deserves none. )

Sometimes you want to write something that's well thought out, in character, and contains a coherant and entertaining plot. And sometimes you just want to take the piss out of someone else's fanfic by having three Unicronians mock it mercilessly with bad attempts at witty banter. Actual writing will return as soon as my beta is done with it, here is some MST.

( Warning for rape, character and otherwise )

A small note of trivia: anyone in the TFDeadzone RPG (and Primus knows why they’d be reading this dreck to begin with) may notice a mildly familiar character appearing at the end of the chapter. He’s gotten better, I promise. Thanks also to my dad for a bit of advice in the Science! Department.

Part One found here. Not that it will make this make any more sense.-

( Onward and...well, downward. )

Having gotten the bad fluffslash out of the way, let us now take a moment to contemplate bad Deceptiporn.

( Phoenix tattoo. Seriously. )

I'm long overdue in posting the second part of this. Although I doubt anyone is waiting with bated (baited?) breath to see how it turns out.

Part one of this glorious bit of glurg can be found here.

( Part two of three. Onward! )

Finishing up the MST for this one so I can go ahead and work on its sequel.

...I really do need to get back to actual, y'know, work. At some point.

Chapters One and Two here.

Chapters Three and Four

( Chapter Five )

I addressed this fic a while back, but felt it needed the full MST treatment. The chapters are short, so I'm posting this in two-chapter chunks this time.

( Chapter One )

( Chapter Two )

After spending a few days with wingdance and playing her DS, I am completely and hopelessly addicted to "Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney". In three days I got up to halfway through the last case. All the characters are completely and totally awesome (except for Meekins, who just bugs me), the game's enthralling and...yeah, I admit it, the slash readings are off the scale. Edgeworth is an angsty sort of awesome, Wright just plain rocks and Gumshoe...he started out as annoying, but he definitely grew on me. Maya's not that bad either when she keeps her mouth shut. If anyone knows the location of good fic and art for the game, I'd like to see it. I've already exhausted y!Gallery and DevArt.

Also, got this in a PM this morning.

I saw that you edited my "Lack of Forgiveness" story, and thank you. But next
time, tell me what you are doing with my stories. So that way I know what you
are doing with them.

Thank you
Kellyq

If you haven't been keeping up, KellyQ is the author of the fic I've been MSTing. I didn't know she was still in the TF fic business and sent back a reply to ask if I could continue.


That's okay ^_ ^ I'm now going back and fixing some of the stuff on "Lack of
Forgiveness" I do want to make it better. Now for your question on finishing it,
I'm not sure when the next update is, but I'll let you know ... and I'm having
someone look over this story with me.


So no one can say I don't have permission to do it. Not sure how she found out, but my LJ is listed on my ff.net profile. I'm just glad she's cool with it.

Chapter Four has been MSTed at long last.

First chapter.

Second chapter.

Third chapter.

( Into the theater! )